Well, it looks fine to me. Is this a remake of the movie 'Christine,' by any chance? wink I'd probably need to see the next sentence to find out if "Jimmy" developed angry or jealous feelings toward the friend or not.


DD adds that it needs to read that "My friend and I" went for a ride, anyway. But beyond that, it sounds like a great start to an interesting story.


DD was complaining recently about a similarly egregious usage error in an AP Lit assignment. So I'm sad to say that it doesn't necessarily get better.


Schrödinger's cat walks into a bar. And doesn't.