Of course it's poor writing. He has severe dysgraphia. This is as good as it gets when he has to write it out by hand. He can give his subplots more subplots when he's dictating. I wasn't so concerned with the quality of writing as to how to help him learn that he can't be rude even when what he is saying is the truth.

Originally Posted by Ellipses
This is very poor writing. My daughter has answered this question negatively, but in proper writing format.

My husband was asked to write an essay about his town. He wrote it on the color brown. It brought a good grade and was witty. And he was right, everything in the town is brown.

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