Thank you for your response, Petunia! Hmmm... I hear you. On the one hand I guess it's too verbose but I just like (actually feel almost compelled) to have my concerns memoralized and clearly spelled out to everyone. I did express them at the meeting but am unsure if I did so well enough. The they came back with their long justification for the bvagueness and I just said "okay" and nodded. I feel like I consented at the meeting. So, I feel like this is my way of saying "I thought more about your argument and it is not acceptable - this is why..." And give them a more eleoquent and substanital argument. YKIM?