He had an OT evaluation for fine motor and sensory issues. The 504 also requested a “motor planning” evaluation and I don’t know if that was done. I don’t know enough about testing to understand. I see no evidence that this was conducted.
I would replace the struck through text with the red bold text above.
Also, you do not want admit that you don't understand something in writing IMO because it can be used to talk down to you/trivialize your inputs later (paranoia is the only thing keeping me sane)
Also, say what you want explicitly and vigorously:-
Regardless of the results of the testing, it’s clear he needs more from his 504. I would prefer I respectfully request that he have an educational evaluation to see if there are any learning disabilities (especially around language),
YMMV
PS
Someone like Jonlaw would probably have the best ideas on a letter like this
