Interesting...

As a former writing teacher, I'd recommend a) a tape/voice recorder so he can talk it out as fast as it comes, b) time for drafting so that he doesn't feel like it has to be out and done and perfect the first time.

I have to process writing aloud often, and I'm writing a novel. I often recommended that my college students read their work aloud as they were writing because hearing it can help them to get what's actually translating between mind and paper.

If that makes any sense... I'm so tired, I'm not sure MY mind is working here!

Kriston