I hope you're not offended if i start commenting before i read the WHOLE thing.  My attention span ain't that great!
- I do not like the stealth option.  Stealth option is how the government works.  It sucks.  People are fed up with new programs disguised as tack-on to other programs.  A new model should stand on it's merits or forget it.  I realize that's not the way things work today, but i am a firm believer that there is room for honesty and directness.
- I am not crazy about eliminating sciences such as biology.  Seems to be a prejudice there?  The goal should be to foster immagination/creative thought in all disciplines.
- additionally, the comments about the need to limit dual enrollment between the HS and college level smacks to me of being a flase limitation. If there's a roadblock, don't drive around it, knock it down.  Identify the shortcomings of the current way of thinking and propose a solution to get it to work in the way is should have been intended to work.
That's as far as i skimmed.  I like the general idea of this though.  The one issue i see is "no child left behind". I can hear the screaming already.  What we need is to change NCLB to "All children to the best of their potential".
lastly, limiting this to HS is shortsighted.  I know, you have to start somewhere, but it would be nice to see a larger vision that also builds the foundation to preparing ALL children for such a system.
Good luck!
Poppa