An outline would help. First, you need the idea, then develop on it, like things to do to improve it, or new ideas, then support them on your ideas and how they would help.
A new or similar idea in each paragraph.
Things around those lines.
Then you summarize at the end, and make a good conclusion, like "I hope you will ___". DON'T put the end. I got yelled at for that in fifth grade...

Hope this helps!

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