Thank you! This is great concrete advice. It sounds like maybe I'm not doing it wrong wink

He's full of ideas, but getting them onto the page...well, you know. He does better with it broken into bits, it seems. And his punctuation and spelling aren't too bad. When we get to paragraphs, though...I predict there will be trouble there.

It sounds like your son *is* a gifted writer. I wish I could read the story about his dying cat. I mean, it would probably make me cry, but still. Wow.